~Textualizing~
Hello to the world, bonkers over love
Today at Sour Lemons and Tequila
We're set to concoct the potion,
A special recipe ~to~The~Macarena~
Let's start with the Ingredients:
Quality time, 3-4 times a week,
A good laugh, together,
No need to buy, it's inside you seek.
Grab some common topic of discussion,
One to two times a day,
You'll disagree; learn to do that,
You'll hang up; aim to make them stay.
Ah, there are perks in commitment
You turn around to go but he grabs,
Twirls you around, catches you
A look that demands so strong, it stabs.
Yup, it's delicious, this love concoction
It has the roller coaster dangers
The thrill of adrenaline too
Know too much too less, part family part strangers
Running to the chemist for me
Totally something that you'd do
Becomes the essential catalyst
That makes me fall more for you
Just as important is : understanding
Each others limits to avoid
Another fight that we could have
As armored, brainless droids.
Ah, commitment is serious
No toying or fooling around
Forget-me-not says the fun
It's where more love is found
A not so "institutionalized" take on Kim's prompt on Poets United: Committed. But happy to share something on commitment especially during this love week! A very happy Valentines Day to you all!

Lovely! Playful and loving--Happy Day to you!
ReplyDeleteYou too! Thanks a lot :)
DeleteI smiled all the way through this one, as you cover the many facets of long-term commitment. The practical and romantic shine through the words, coexisting very nicely!
ReplyDeleteHappy Anniversary Kim! Great prompt on this day :) Though I have barely touched the words you described for commitment! I'm glad it still managed to make you smile. Thank you :)
DeleteA very fine recipe indeed!
ReplyDeleteI love making it ;) Thanks Susan!
DeleteAhh... a keeper! Love this!
ReplyDeleteGlad you do :)
DeleteA perfect recipe for a relationship to grow!
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ReplyDeleteWell said Chhavi! :-)
ReplyDeleteThe recipe it seems comes from an experienced chefs kitchen, so one must adhere to it to taste the best cuisine :)
ReplyDeleteNice one !
this is powerful
ReplyDeleteYou turn around to go but he grabs,
Twirls you around, catches you
A look that demands so strong, it stabs.
Thanks for pointing that out! Those loving glances do have so much to say, don't they!? :) Thanks a lot.
DeleteLovely!! simple and well, a quick time recipe! :)
ReplyDeleteAkila